This Game was Okay a little odd since it felt like 2 short games were slapped together.
Feedback:
Gameplay:
During the Collect the Gas cans:
I only saw the Monster at the very start the rest of the time he was never in view or a threat he probably should of been at least fast enough to stay visible at all times to give the player a feeling of unease of if he will catch up.
After getting the gas cans the transition is just a black screen and drops you into a mental hospital?? which honestly just felt like a second game added in and had nothing to do with the first right now.
Hospital Section:
A large use of jumpscares here the images lasted too long at times, plus it became expected for them to pop up.
The Code was just on a piece of paper, would of been better to have the numbers written on the wallswith a symbol or something to depict the order, and the paper being the key to that order.
Sound:
The static sound between transitioning levels was Very loud.
Jumpscare sounds were too low adding to the images lasting too long, and since jumpscares rely on loud sound + a visual to scare, they just weren't very effective.
Story:
There seemed to be None so any feedback would be irrelevant.
Other:
Would like Credits addedeven if just to the games itchio page
This helps Those that created the images/assets used by letting others know they exist
This also helps Content Creators know where sounds and images come from so they don't have to worry about copyright.
If you like jumpscares, this is the type of game for you. The first part plays like a slenderman style game, but the second part relies a bit too much on jumpscares, especially full screen ones.
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This was an interesting horror game that starts by collecting 5 gas cans in a horrifying forest before ending up in a strange abandoned hospital area. The game makes use of lighting and jumpscares to scare the player where both 3D and 2D jumpscares were used to scare the player. It would be good if there was some storytelling going on in the game as it is kinda strange that the story transitioned from being in a forest to being trapped in an abandoned mental hospital? Other than that, maybe puzzles can be added into the game to lengthen the game and make the game more challenging for the player.
Thank you for reading my comment and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours.
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This Game was Okay a little odd since it felt like 2 short games were slapped together.
Feedback:
Gameplay:
During the Collect the Gas cans:
I only saw the Monster at the very start the rest of the time he was never in view or a threat he probably should of been at least fast enough to stay visible at all times to give the player a feeling of unease of if he will catch up.
After getting the gas cans the transition is just a black screen and drops you into a mental hospital?? which honestly just felt like a second game added in and had nothing to do with the first right now.
Hospital Section:
A large use of jumpscares here the images lasted too long at times, plus it became expected for them to pop up.
The Code was just on a piece of paper, would of been better to have the numbers written on the walls with a symbol or something to depict the order, and the paper being the key to that order.
Sound:
The static sound between transitioning levels was Very loud.
Jumpscare sounds were too low adding to the images lasting too long, and since jumpscares rely on loud sound + a visual to scare, they just weren't very effective.
Story:
There seemed to be None so any feedback would be irrelevant.
Other:
Would like Credits added even if just to the games itchio page
This helps Those that created the images/assets used by letting others know they exist
This also helps Content Creators know where sounds and images come from so they don't have to worry about copyright.
I will be playing this live 8/22 around 630-7 PM EST =D.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCqG-h93UiuKJBXTXECi1wFA
If you like jumpscares, this is the type of game for you. The first part plays like a slenderman style game, but the second part relies a bit too much on jumpscares, especially full screen ones.
Hello. Cool short game. I liked it a lot. Game here which is the first game play.
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This was an interesting horror game that starts by collecting 5 gas cans in a horrifying forest before ending up in a strange abandoned hospital area. The game makes use of lighting and jumpscares to scare the player where both 3D and 2D jumpscares were used to scare the player. It would be good if there was some storytelling going on in the game as it is kinda strange that the story transitioned from being in a forest to being trapped in an abandoned mental hospital? Other than that, maybe puzzles can be added into the game to lengthen the game and make the game more challenging for the player.
Thank you for reading my comment and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours.
thanks for playing i hope u enjoyed.
Great game, one small critique, I would make the jump scares shorter to give it more impact.
thanks for the tip iam learning from my mistakes.